Flawless

Another about Him.

Eyes

As dark as chocolate

Deep and full of emotion

Rich and pure

 

Skin

So fair and soft

Electrifying to the touch

My fingers linger a second too long

 

Hands

So feminine and gentle

How can they belong to a boy

No flaws that my eye can see

 

Lips

Are mesmerizing

So pink and inviting

I can only imagine what they feel like

For now, I do not know

 

Author's Note

Yet another about him.

Reviews

[steph]

I am in love with this poem. Its so tender, and sweet. It also shows that true gentleness of a man is what a woman appreciates, not macho stuff. I love it.. Good poem, Great flow, Excellent content

[shedevil]

he must be someone special to you, i can feel it from your words... tonight i will pray that he above anyone else feels the emotion you hold

[shedevil]

this piece is flawless. like the emotion ratiating though it and the gripping last line left me hungry.

[iamcarolfierce]

Wasn't it romantic to focus on even the smallest detail about your love one? :) I love this. How I wish my special one would take time to look at me, and tell me these tings.

[Timtim]

It speaks about about a sexual attraction to someone, who seems to be boy.
I like the writing style, describing part by part. Its ends like you are going to make a move.
Nice write

[Christopher.Holmberg]

I honestly love this. A girl comes to mind when i read this...great poem! thanks

[Jane Lockheart]

well thats pretty much how it is. minus that "happily ever after" part.

[E.H. Monroe]

One of the ol love poems. Girl meets boy girl likes boy at the ripe age we all live happily ever after.
There's stronger in ya.