The One

The One

A Poem by toderoopoo

When you looked at me
You saw me

You saw my flaws
You saw what I was

You saw my flaws
You never paused

Your outstretched hand
Asked no demands

That outstretched hand
Became my homeland

© 2016 toderoopoo


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That is so nice and warm happy love poem.

Blessings

El

Posted 8 Years Ago


toderoopoo

8 Years Ago

Oh thank you :)
Very beautiful ....... thanks for sharing

Posted 8 Years Ago


toderoopoo

8 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words :)

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Added on June 21, 2016
Last Updated on June 21, 2016
Tags: love, peace, serenity

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toderoopoo
toderoopoo

Phoenix, AZ



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