Hope

Hope

A Poem by toderoopoo

I watched the darkness coming
I watched it as it consumed me
I wished that it would take me
Surrounded by the darkness, a light confused me
The light drew me
The light showed me - I was worthy
Worthy of this life
Worthy of my right
This light was hope
This hope saved me

© 2016 toderoopoo


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i like the elements; the light and the dark you used here to show the path that brings hope! wonderful job!
"Surrounded by the darkness, a light confused me"
this line could change anybody's life! keep writing :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


toderoopoo

8 Years Ago

And that little light changed mine! :) Thank you! :)

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Added on June 21, 2016
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toderoopoo
toderoopoo

Phoenix, AZ



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