Lost

Lost

A Poem by toderoopoo

Water splatters
pitter patter

what once was my home, my hearth,
is nothing but; withered dirt

the place that knew me
the place that made me

this place has shamed me
this place has betrayed me

© 2016 toderoopoo


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it shows a feeling of hiraeth! amazingly done! great job indeed! i really like the plots of your poems :D
keep writing :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


toderoopoo

8 Years Ago

Oh thank you so much!

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toderoopoo
toderoopoo

Phoenix, AZ



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