Fly on the Wall

Fly on the Wall

A Poem by toby thomas
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Life gives you rough patches and I am always looking for the silver lining but this time. It hit me like a truck.this is one of those times.

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© 2014 toby thomas


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I like this poem, the sentence "waiting for sunshine and the world beyond"
Holding a hope for what's to come we all do. This relfects that feling.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Thank you for taking your time out and reviewing this.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A well written poem. My favorite line was "These wings are not buzzing they are rusted lost their shine."

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on September 15, 2014
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toby thomas
toby thomas

hyderabad, India



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I am just a beginner at this. I write cause i like it. more..

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A Poem by toby thomas