Salvation Of Soul

The more You know the more You hate,

hey darkness i don't believe in fate,

You fear everything when your conscience speaks,

My Soul will be  captured in everlasting trees,

The living will of a dying bird or a child's cry reaching a  mother's heart,

Its all igniting my  fire to live,

A thousand symphonies in my head,

Drools me around like a peaceful death,

Death is the truth that no one believes,

These sorrows aren't forever but no one sees,

Life is peaceful if you learn to forgive...

Let my shadow be captured and my spirit live.

forever n ever n ........ 

Reviews

[toby thomas]

Thank you for the review. I am happy someone had a nice time reading my work.
I am new at all this so still don't have that vocab of a poet.
Just imagination and nothing more.

[Tina Kline]

A dark, rather eerie poem. Very well written, it pulls the reader in.
Impressive job.