Buck's Cannabis Tree

Buck's Cannabis Tree

A Poem by toby thomas
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This one is a fairy tale but there are no fairies. A dark compilation of thoughts. Happy Trippin :)

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This story of my friend is like a wounded heart's plea..

Story of Buck who lives in the stem of a cannabis tree..

Buck had a flying dragon "Zozion".

Who used to take us through the milky way and the Orion..

We used to take trips to the moon or go meet the Martians..

Smoking Buck's private stash throughout the way..

Tripping merrily for nights and days...

then one fine day the Men of the clouds came...

they wore dark hats and had thousands of slaves...

They had powers of the seas and oceans combined...

They had only one craving and that was to get eternally High.,

These men heard of the biggest cannabis tree and were amazed n surprised..

They knew if they could get this they will be in paradise..

So they searched for Buck's house seeking his demise..

Buck was long gone into the universal grey mist..

Their are stories in the horizon that they took away the tree....

Some say Buck was dead some say he lives in the mountains as a Hippie..

I am still looking for Buck in every cannabis tree..

Maybe one day i'll find him in the hills and will set him free.. 

© 2014 toby thomas


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Awesome narrative poem. Reminds me (and I bet a lot of other people) of thinking back on high school friends while in college. Thanks for the memory. I like how it is sort of trippy, but not too trippy. I also like the nostalgic effect of the last two lines. Also, the structure of using couplets helps reinforce the idea that Buck matches up and "rhymes with" just this one other thing: pot. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Thank you for the review. Yes i wanted to keep it minimal, just to the extent that even someone who has been sober can understand what is really being said!! and doesn't feel left out.
I wrote it in my college days. just never thought i will post it anywhere but i am glad i did as you liked it.
Thanks again.
Happy writing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Awesome narrative poem. Reminds me (and I bet a lot of other people) of thinking back on high school friends while in college. Thanks for the memory. I like how it is sort of trippy, but not too trippy. I also like the nostalgic effect of the last two lines. Also, the structure of using couplets helps reinforce the idea that Buck matches up and "rhymes with" just this one other thing: pot. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 21, 2014
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toby thomas
toby thomas

hyderabad, India



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