A rumbling world

What is happening?

World is breaking
Taking
Hating
Chasing the feeling
What happened
Handed
I was left empty minded
Can see
Can't feel
World should be real.
Is it worth?
Truth
I was never ruled
but I was bullied
Truly
Fulfilling my duty
Cracks are fading
I did some work
Love worth trading
Ovulating
Disgracing
Overwhelmed
and I'm changing
Love is not for all
and love is never for the one
I have to fall
and choose whether to keep living.
Intriguing no feeding
Wouldn't want the world to know
what I am feeling
No hating just playing
with my mind and the ones
who I choose for mating
Basic existing
Evolution and it's ending.
Cracks, holes, empty space.

Reviews

[KWP]

Hey Tobias - it's been a while but so nice to see you here :-)

Your poem is excellent it certainly allows one to question this life, this self, this all - it is read like the narrator is running through all the uncertainties and all the questions of the who's whats when's whys and how's - all question that run through the minds of many millions I am sure .. Your depiction of life and uncertainties is fabulous here and I enjoyed your words for the offering of a deeper thought and meditation - nice one xx

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Thank you. I must admit I lost all inspiration for quite some time and there was no light at the end of my path. I still find it hard to find the words in my mind maze. So shifting and confusing at times.

[KWP]

Yeah I understand that - but I guess we just need remember with all the shifting and confusing we have the opportunity to rearrange exactly how we like it - nice to see you Xxx