8250

Please read the numbers as single degits as if it was a telephone number

A number was given - 8250
On the arm it was inked - 8250
I never would have guessed - 8250
That I would be smitten - 8250
By how the law was to be written - 8250

I wanted to be free - 5802
It could have been a given - 5802
But no I fucked up - 5802
To me it is fair - 5802
That I would be smitten - 5802
By how the law was written - 5802

My gents please come close - 0666
I can give you your freedom - 0666
However be sure - 0666
That your soul would get taken - 0666
By how the law has been written - 0666

Yes thank you my lord - 8250
I concede my soul - 5802
You have my worship - 8250
I'll serve the forbidden - 5802
Cause you have been smitten - 0666
By the devil and heaven - 0666

Reviews

[Marie]

Very strange stuff. I read it twice, and the meaning escapes me, but I understand the feeling behind the words.

[Tobias Rasmussen]

I might be the only one in this world who gets the number of the beast "666" to represent the devil. So my other 2 characters sold their soul to the devil to be free. But it might come unclear.

[Marie]

I think most people will understand what the number 666 represents.

[KWP]

This is a great read, the spiritual journey and acceptance of a long life in some kind of prison no doubt. The last two words play out very well, as within duality we have it all within us, the good the bad, the sane the mad, the happy the sad, the love the loss.

I write to somebody in prison, he has been there a long time, and these words do reflect steps within his journey.

Nice work my friend :) x x