Goodbye

A friend of mine comitted suicide this weekend. Please just hear me out.

Are you free to see,
the truth I want to show.
In memory of he.
The one we all love and know.
Just about the same age as us.
We didn't know, you never said.
Your happy gestures and smile; I'm at a loss.
Now it is broken, your precious lifethread.
We are sad to let you go.
But you suffered and was sad.
We all feel like we were too slow.
We feel we could have made a difference, just a tad.
My precious one, how you are at peace.
you'll be in our hearts.
We'll cry and laugh, your memory won't cease.
The times we spent, we made it an art.

Goodbye my precious friend...

Reviews

[Demii]

This is so sorrowful and sad I'm so sorry for your loss, you can tell in the words that someone writes how smart one is, in the end things make a person stronger, and nothing was any ones fault. This was a great sad and emotional piece.

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Thank you very much for the kind words :) I am somewhat not content with how it turned out as it does not give him the praise he deserved. He was an artist of life and i couldn't and can't hold a candle to his grace.

[Demii]

Anytime :) & I think it was great! you have your whole life to write about anything you what. :)

[Spacecadet]

This is beautiful and heartfelt..

[Tobias Rasmussen]

Thank you :) your words mean a lot to me :)

[KWP]

As he is in your hearts, so to are you in his. Life is full of lessons in many shapes and sizes and not one of us is shielded from them unfortunately, your friend is gone, a terrible loss and I am saddened to hear that he felt he had no other options. live your life now to the fullest, don't be afraid to laugh at you.

Your words are beautiful and in this moment I am thinking of you and your friend x x

[Mia Rockwell]

I'm sorry for your loss and how hard this must have been to write. I am glad you can make art out of such sadness.