love can be fun

what's with the love i got?
Right there on the spot.
Couldn't move and shouldn't speak.
They were right, my knees went weak.
Your pretty little smile,
Your brown warm eyes.
I couldn't stay I went to hide.
Had to control these burning desires.
Where had you been?
My love life was oh so thin.
You stole my attention.
Put my heart in suspension.
How was I supposed to see?
You made my imagination go weee.
Thoughts of you every second.
You satisfy me greater than bacon.
You could be my breakfast, lunch and dinner.
Girl you make me a winner.
With you I have won.
With you I have fun.
I am not sassy I'm not gay.
I would love to that thing with you in the hay.
So come with me and let us do that.
I'll give you more than idle chitchat.

Reviews

[I Am Svetlana]

Oh, a spontaneous rendezvous! How luscious and creative. I love the playful feel of these lines and the thought of new partners. Hopefully our narrater will find a person worthy of making him feel like the winner he is. We all deserve to feel like a winner, even if it's all in our heads. Great write and narrative! I enjoyed every word.