I still love you...

I still love you...

A Poem by Tobias Rasmussen
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Not really much to say.. I was just felling the words crawling from my pen.. and then there is that...

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Fading, growing, coming, going.

Feelings for her, for me, for you.

Different, changing, staying, knowing.

What made me fall for you?

I fell, I rose, I crawled to go.

Nowhere, now here, everywhere.

Not knowing, keep showing.

Kept going, now stop!

No more, no less, not even a little.

Still a flame, just say her name,

Let her feelings show,

Let her mind know,

That deep inside,

I want to be by her side.

To stay afloat, just to know.

to be the one, not be gone

From one heart to the next

would she answer my text?

I spilled my heart

And she was so smart

to trample upon it completely

please free me, keep me,

keep me close to you,

I still love you…

 

© 2014 Tobias Rasmussen


Author's Note

Tobias Rasmussen
I am a dane, so english is my second langauge plz bear with me.

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The heartache is felt. Glad you can put the feelings into writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


very heartfelt :) you can feel the deep love resonating within you xx

Posted 10 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2014
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Tobias Rasmussen
Tobias Rasmussen

Copenhagen, Denmark, Denmark



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I am new. I am young. My writing highly reflects my age and my POV in life. I have no experience writing happy and philosophical stuff. I can write dark and sad stuff since I can do what other young p.. more..

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