Lonely Echoes

a 10 line write..

Sparkling starshine sprinkles the night sky~
While under the pitted moonscape I cry out.
The cool predawn air frosting my every howl~
Lonely echoes bouncing off deep canyon walls.
I listen, yearning for love's ardent vociferation;
to richly reward my solitary nocturnal vigilance
with another nomadic pilgrim's answering call!
Seeking to worship at that secret soul shrine,
emitting flagrant scent of desperate invitation,
drawing a fellow sojourner indelibly to my side.

Reviews

[Daytonight]

Very beautiful. Wonderful imagery. I love your choice of wording. Keep on penning.

[Matthew Kult]

Very vivid imagery. Great word use, wonderful read and write.

Matthew