I Dream of You

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I dream of you
my little brown-haired,
brown-eyed beauty.
I dream of pigtails,
pink party dresses
and polka-dot bows.
I dream of sweet hugs
and candy kisses
of pure innocence,
bouncing curls
and belly laughs.
I can see you in my dreams
and you're smiling at me.
You haven't been born yet
and are yet to be conceived,
but my beautiful baby girl,
I know your name
and I'll wait for you
until the time is right.
I'm so anxious
to meet you.

Reviews

[VERONICA]

AWWW!!

Cute again! I liked the kind of words used that just fit the mise-en-sen perfectly. although I think you could have better word choice on "I'm so anxious"- I feel "so" could be word with more syllables which would help that last line be not so stumbly and it could be a "cuter" word which would go better with the poem- ya know? The imagery was great though!

[Leah Maldonado]

awww, this is a very beautiful heart felt poem. I really liked it.
I know your name

that line was kind of clever...I'm not sure how but it was.
Leah