water (stone)

a recollection of stillness

river acoustics

water serenades smooth stone

sings in this moment

Author's Note

give it to me straight, criticism is great, positive would be helpful

Reviews

[Chris Orza]

The alliteration works really well to mimic the sound the water makes as it splashes downriver. Love the title as well. Shows how water, something fluid, can coax and even change something so hard. No real criticism for this one. Or, uh, I guess it's pretty short.