Serenity (Draft 2)

Personally I like draft one much better, it flows better and was from the heart

Serenity

a Awake upon an evening of turmoil

b My feet tread away from sadness.

a Walking across soft turf, soil,

b Towards the darkness.

Alone,

c Breaking at the seam,

c Past artificial gleam.

b I stride with purpose,

d Away from sorrow,

e I raise my gaze

e To find the sky razed

f With the light from above,

d A constant glow,

f A sign of love.

Stars.

Author's Note

I included the rhyme scheme on left side for you, it is a little rough

Reviews

[Lola_Bee]

if a broken heart gives you strength to write this beautifully i wish not to mend them back to together but i am not that unkind. love this poem

[tmasse]

thanks, this idea was from before the heartbreak tho