Unforgettable

Stream of conscience poem.

Love,
pain, heartbreak, men,
loath, life, strive,
succeed, defeat, lose gain,
tonight, forget, forgive,
get passed, passed over,
invisible, unlovable, loveless, hopeless,
unbreakable, devoted, never,
wanting, ridiculus, get over,
unable, saving himself, obsessive,
immature, grade school, puppy love,
true love, rebel, different,
great, grand, wonderful,
mysterious, exciting, all around,
talented, studious, perfect,
illegal, experimental, surprising,
doesn't matter, odd feeling,
thankless, helpless, hopeless, honest,
embarrassed, still hope, understand,
relived, next...

Unforgettable.

Reviews

[The DuchessPoet]

This is definitely one of my fav's!
I love what you did with this piece!
your poem sparked a lot of really good discussion amongst my book-club members!
AND I LOVE READING IT OUT LOUD!

SENSATIONAL WRITE!

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