Cold

Cold

A Poem by tlhisler
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Just Something Quick.

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Cold

I feel cold
So cold that shivering is too hard to do now
I have no hold
no presence here
My voice goes unheard 
My tears unseen
Touch me please
Take my hand before I disapear
It's a deep dark void and there is no end
I can't fuel my anger
Numbing waves ache my core
Screams rip from me 
but no avail
Help me
I cry my voice broken
Touch me please
Hold on to me

© 2016 tlhisler


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tlhisler
Poetry isn't my strongest trait

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Sometimes the quick writes are the best if we think too much the feeling and emotion is lost. That's not the case with this one. Very well done.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Feelings of angst are strong in this one. Foreboding scenario. Well written. Lydi**

Posted 8 Years Ago


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