I Surrender

Just a little God Poem

I surrender

To the exaltation of light

This baptism of fire

And liquid skies

Breathe a palette lit within

To delight a child

Songs break from tears

Beauty from ashes

This your legacy

 

I will seek you in the solace of morning

Receive the touch

Warm on my skin

Let praise rise

Like butterflies aloft

On gentle summer winds

Let hope bloom

Across the surface of my spirit

Tranquil

At peace

Reflecting the light

That is you

TL Boehm  

Reviews

[Jack...]

Breathe a palette lit within
Across the surface of my spirit

I loved the entire piece but these two lines were enchanting to me. Very nice.

[Nautili]

lovely write. Reminded me of the lyrics to a song-"He gave me beauty for ashes, the oil of joy for mourning and the spirit of praise for the garment of heaviness." Yes, a splendid trade indeed.

[TL Boehm]

Nautili - SO AWESOME to see you!

[Nautili]

Thanks- I haven't been here much at all, took a break for a bit and still so busy, not much time to read others' work- yours was worth it though.....encouraging and a good reminder of what we have in Him.