Paint Me A Picture

Paint Me A Picture

A Poem by Tiarra Lynn

Paint me a picture,
In colors bright and vivid,
of a world without hatred,
a world without greed.

Paint me a picture,
in a water color piece,
of a world were there was no war,
only love and peace.

Paint me a picture,
with pallets of oil paints,
where any simple human,
could be mistaken for a saint.

© 2016 Tiarra Lynn


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I have no words......my voice is in my awe!! Well done!

Posted 7 Years Ago


This is simple yet beautiful! The rhyme scheme makes everything more pleasing. Keep up the good work xoxo

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is simply beautiful! Nice job!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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If only, like this, simple poem with a wish of millions

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is so beautiful! I love how well it flows and I especially love the imagery and message that you showed in this piece! I really like how you started each stanza with the line "paint me a picture". You really did paint a picture for me with your stunning words. A really excellent poem, you should be incredibly proud!

Posted 8 Years Ago


I like the use of the word "paint". Would be nice if we could paint a picture and paint the world into a better place. Thank you Tiarra for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


This is really good! I love the repetition and rhyme scheme! Personally, I find it hard to write happy, nice and rhyming pieces, kudos to you girl! :p Plus your line two lines a a-frickin-mazing! You're telling a story and a pleasant one at that.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on June 12, 2016
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Tags: happiness, earth, world peace, love, truth, war

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Tiarra Lynn
Tiarra Lynn

pittsburgh, PA



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