As Goodbye Descends

A romantic song of love and forever.

Moments of spring light the winter

Moments of love rule the night

When I remember you there

All the dreams and the prayers

It seemed we still had time

 

Some moments seemed to last forever

Some didn’t last long at all

When I remember your touch

And the caress of your love

I never thought we would fall

 

But we shall run through the fields of forever

Hand in hand, till time passes by

And the dreams that we share

Will be waiting there

Till the end

As goodbye descends

 

Memories of you, so enchanting

Memories lost to the night

When you took hold of my hand

And together we ran

Not seeing that time passed us by

 

And we shall run through the fields of forever

Hand in hand, till life’s passed us by

And the dreams that we share

Will be waiting there

Till the end

As goodbye descends

 

And love could’ve lasted forever

If I had never let go

But somewhere in the dark

I lost hold of your heart

What happened, I’ll never know

 

But we shall run through the fields of forever

Hand in hand, till time passes by

And the dreams that we share

Will be waiting there

Till the end

 

And we shall fly through the skies of tomorrow

Side by side, till life’s passed us by

And the love that we shared

Will be waiting there

Till the end

As goodbye descends

 

Author's Note

This was inspired by the anime 'Kanon'. which has a very beautiful storyline. I've always wanted to write a song like this, and this one took quite a bit of time to write. Anyways, let me know what you think, I put a lot of heart and soul into this one.

Reviews

[Song of Mercy]

I agree with the other reviewers Titus, this is beautiful. That you took time is evident. The cadence is good and the flow is great. I suspect the skeleton of this flowed easily. Thanks for sharing, Barb.

[Ice Queen of the Vampir..]

Wow, this is a beautiful song. Wonderfully written and the flow is perfect. I really enjoyed this piece, fantastic job!!!

Heather

[S.J.Floreen]

It's beautifully written. I get the impression the couple is not together in the end.