OCCUPIED

.falling to pieces..

OCCUPIED


You know the first time our eyes met, 
itw's the last song you sing to me 
my tears have dried each time it falls 
This could be a time when music says goodbye 

I was the pain that keeps on fallin' 
and you're the stone that's hardened more 
I've tried it all but you keep silent, 
then walk away as I choose to stay 

In your least speech I hear you shoutin' 
with every word I listened unspoken 
and now you're tellin' me "it's not yet over 
you come to me, like a holiday, 
we'll leave astray". 

Together rise 
Together fall 
You're the only one 
who filled my soul. 

I keep pretending to unpretend
to you my me'mries seemed occupied 
a lot of words you had denied 
and then your heartbeat spelled it out 

Creep of lost I do not know 
your smiles fillin' me unoccupied 
full of crowd in an emptiness 
This heart was molde the topicsed denial.

Author's Note

Reviews

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

It's a very emotional poem and also very relatable. And therefore, quite beautiful. Well done.

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. A lot of thoughts and strong statements. It was a roller coaster ride of emotion with a very good ending. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[~Lizzy♬]

I didn't really understand it. Maybe go over it again and fix it up a little bit. Great write though :)

~Lizzy~

[Marie]

Too many mistakes...can't make sense out of it...

[Angelic Surrender]

Beautiful :)

[koi zaire]

nice job

[Aly Jones]

Whoa. This piece you have created has honestly made me speechless.

[Kiari Sabon]

i like it keep up the work