THE BLUE BUG

..crazy little thing..

THE BLUE BUG

When in my despise that loneliness covers me, 
Caused by never- ending life's cruelty, 
I found you stuck on that wall 
Chattering of colors blue and black 
Caught up mine eyes of your rounded back, 
so decide to pick you up, 
from that solid wall which served your home,
Now I know you're a happy bug 
quick with of, this time won't last 
Forever keep a friendship bind 
we're now destined that's one of a kind. 

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..silly thoughts!!!

Reviews

[mhaie]

hehe .. I LIKE IT :)

[Pax]

"Forever keep a friendship bind
we're now destined that's one of a kind. "
~simplicity shouts in volume..great thougths!

[astronaut]

I thought this would be a silly poem but I almost sense a sadness hiding behind it, or maybe that's just me because most of your work conveys that image. Very short and sweet and the picture is cute. :) Very nice job!

[lady france]

win it...

[Amata Luna]

Way to go there. :D Every line gave me a simple way to picture things. Behind your words I can just imagine how you feel and blame it on my head that I actually saw you smile. Hahaha. But this is a good piece. Short it may seem and simple as it may look, behind it you'll know there's still a deeper meaning to it.

[joshua deathdealer]

I like it. Nice work.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

even it sounds simple, but its so good!! very nice imaginary, and full of sense if you could see it well..for me I enjoyed it, sometimes little details, simple things make us calm , have special effect on us, or just see the world with different eyes...thank u!
~nia~

[dan nacario]

Well written!!

[Nicholas Antonio Young]

This is very well done! I honestly love it. Good job :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting thought in the poem. I like the way you led me into the good ending. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote