death lives

..senryu.

• • death lives 

    
    

    the air was blowin', 

    'slips through my veins saying that 

    I'm just nobody. 

    
    

    Never was alone 

    'fore lie revealed the truth 

    life's but a cold wind. 

    
    

    I've learned the laughter 

    they created tears to fall 

    burst of faith was born. 

    
    

    Earth's a shattered mess 

    of greed, pain and shallowness

    world of foolishness. 

    
    

    Nature of man's deeds 

    beneath a darkened dungeon 

    hanging by a thread. 

    
    

    Dark heart still hardened 

    when coins slap a wishing well 

    then a curse was found. 

    
    

    Let this bad dream end 

    though my heart now stops to beat 

    'coz death takes rebirth. 

    
    

    -musicfunk-

Reviews

[Rhea752]

this is amazing!! i had to read it twice to comprehend it. this poem was one of the poems that stuns you for it's depth. Great Write!!!!!

[GunMetal]

In the first haiku, perhaps istead of "before lie revealed the truth

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks!!
:p

[Layla J Omorose]

very good poem

[Coyote Poetry]

"Earth's a shattered mess
of greed, pain and shallowness
world of foolishness. "
The poem is strong and speak the truth. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sugar Plum ♥]

anyone who reached to this point of view from above, deserve admiration...and you feel all that, where we are, what is the world, is it really so empty of sense?
Earth's a shattered mess
of greed, pain and shallowness
world of foolishness.
thank you for making me think about...
~nia~

[Joshua David Vrana]

death comes to all

[dan nacario]

amazing..

[Empirik]

This is intense, and dark, but there is always a place for well written thoughts. Thanks

[Kiari Sabon]

I LIKE IT KEEP IT UP sorry caps was on

[Angelic Surrender]

"The end of life, but not of love."
"Death is only the beginning."
Very true. Great piece. I like it a lot.