the artist

...till we meet again

as smiling in the odds of darkness, life smiled me back
 I called myself a dreamer yet
just a flip of your finger you woke me up.

your eyes said your a lover
yet you proved to be unbeliever.

somewhat, somehow you're in disguise
as sunshine turns to rain,
as first of may evades November.

you act as a villain, but still chose to save me
a speechless voice to me had brought
your endless stares told me the truth

you've left and then created a mark..
. .a sketch of love into my heart.


               -musicfunk-

Reviews

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Really nice lines in this, I enjoyed these:
"your eyes says your a lover
yet you prove to be unbeliever"

"you act as villain, but still choose to save me"

"you leave and then creates a mark
a sketch of love into my heart."

[K.C. Zbryk]

Short but beautiful. that way these words flow and the rhyme scheme make this feel near melodious. I think tribute poems are some of my favorite to read because thay were meant for someone in particular but they somehow make others think of people they have met. Perhap these tribute poems find a way to be universal even when they are not intended to... Anyway fantastic poem!

[Seanne Tholltree]

nicely crafted..

like this:
you act as villain, but still choose to save me
a speechless voice to me had brought
your endless stars told me the truth

you leave and then creates a mark
a sketch of love into my heart.

[Marie]

Good poem; ;you've structured it very well.

[Amata Luna]

What an admiration! Lines went like opposite with one another, but just the same it ended somewhere I never thought it would have been. A nice piece of work. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful poem. You said so much with so few words. Gifts of love are the real diamonds in a life. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[shunik]

to a stranger whom I admire most
=]