the artist

...till we meet again

as smiling in the odds of darkness, life smiled me back
 I called myself a dreamer yet
just a flip of your finger you woke me up.

your eyes said your a lover
yet you proved to be unbeliever.

somewhat, somehow you're in disguise
as sunshine turns to rain,
as first of may evades November.

you act as a villain, but still chose to save me
a speechless voice to me had brought
your endless stares told me the truth

you've left and then created a mark..
. .a sketch of love into my heart.


               -musicfunk-

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

I've come back to read this...and yes, still as sweet as the first time I read this!

"you've left and then created a mark..
. .a sketch of love into my heart."~ I love this...Great write!

[shunik]

thanks Rob
...just confuse about the tenses
haha,..anyhow your review means a lot
read morethanks Rob
...just confuse about the tenses
haha,..anyhow your review means a lot
t.y. =]

[Robbie~xoxo~]

You're welcome, I enjoyed reading it. :)

[Pax]

good, very nice portrayal of an artist.

[shunik]

thanks

[...]

This was very good, my dear poet :)

[shunik]

;p
thanks

[D. Pesek]

other than a few minor grammatical issues this was good. it had a nice flow to it

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I loved the style and the topic of leaving, even for short time, some people can have strong effect on our mind...Thanks for sharing!

[shunik]

your welcome

[~Lizzy♬]

Oh this is so good! :) I loved how simple, yet extravagant it was! :)

~Lizzy~

[Kiari Sabon]

love it

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is such a Sweet poem...The longing for this love was nicely conveyed. I absolutely loved the last to lines... A Lovely write!

[Grace Catherine C.]

It's good, very good, but something about it seemed somewhat choppy, don't get me wrong though, I liked this.