TWINKLE

..my guardian angel

at night where cloud's a cyclone purse

I leaped my bed to glance an eye,

li'l sparks towards me outgrow 

from darkest room he still beset

witest cloth to him behold 

out of most blessed had blessed me more 

this lad to me hath turn a gaze 

when eyes of light from he coveted mine 

to a glimpse second fled he afar

a piece of fur had fall from an angel's fly..

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Author's Note

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Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

strong feeling...even mysterious! very nice :)

[Alex Vidmar]

different. but loved it all the same.

[Amila Jay]

Excellent write:-)

[Robert Robbie Lord Dudl..]

nice discription of the personal private space
yes, the fur of him and her will fly
your excellent little wings, little poem ~ will fly
fast and best whitest cloth what a lovely glimpse

[Coyote Poetry]

A interesting poem. Glances into thoughts in the poem. You create good visions with the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Empirik]

Interesting...I enjoy the open ending and the fantasy quality of this piece. You also seem to have a classic voice. One of tradition. Nice! :)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Nice ending. Nice title. Nice guardian angel.

[Amata Luna]

Another poem to delight in. Love your choice of words and the way you use them to weave a pure image of feathers floating and angels as light as thistledown... Love your language too. :)

[EMF]

I loved this. Bright, fun and scintilating. A sheer diamond perfection

[i-love-you-boo♥]

This is really good I like the wording in it good write