LET ME BE

I was lost

Soft tender lips

let be thy wine,

to your life's so cruel

may I be your shoulder?

cuddle on the rainbow

let days be ours,

so time passed care not I 

to be your history,

tremblin' as the wind

let me be your breath,

between your lies 

the truth be I

touch me not to my soul for

I afraid beggin' you to be real,

intertwine with existence

still I mere livin' a dream.

-musicfunk-

Reviews

[EMF]

A terrific poem, and one of the reasons I leave the RR button turned on, most of the time. Handled with beauty and style. A real banjo of a job

[Amata Luna]

Once again, you did very good with doing your poem. Imbued with emotions and the right choice of words... just a very good piece to read.

[i-love-you-boo♥]

awesome job you did really good

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. The lines are strong and the story feel like a wish. No weakness in this poem. I like poetry where you must read between the lines to get visions and thoughts. This poem does. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[shunik]

...I made it during my last song syndrome,.
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