TANGLED HEART

..to my knight =]

Can you hear it beating twice?

Hear not, you choose.

Rise the flame that makes me sing

Is this what really love is?

Soothe my dreams to be livin’

Then you came and say you’re leavin’

Into my heart struck a dagger

Not a word you told no more

Even rains teared for vain

‘round your eyes ‘got no response

So what’s the point of givin’ ask?

 

Live lifeless song from li’l lips

Off my empty soul to be ubsurd

Searchin’ the lost gallantry

Thought who, I’m still in pain?

 

If nightingale can do some sing

Narrating my old unended story

Leased the memory I dropped away

Odds to flabbergast!

Vanished in breathless heart

Elternal love is what I’ve found.

Author's Note

..let your asides be heard
=]

Reviews

[Amata Luna]

The language that you use is a very fun read for me. The last line INLOVE is such the best for me. :) Thanks for sharing this.

[Parashar]

nice style ........

[Coyote Poetry]

So many strong statements in the poem. I had to read a few time to enjoy the use of language.
"‘round your eyes ‘got no response

So what’s the point of givin’ ask?"
Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[i-love-you-boo♥]

This is really good I like the the point and the emotion to it really good

[Drew Peterson]

that's is goood keep it up i like the emotion to it.