KING OF MY HEART

..shower with love...

KING OF MY HEART

                During my young perception of the world where vulnerability tied me up in the middle of courteous reality and pain just breathe nowhere but in a nightmare, I was already beguiled by such devotion natured from the day I first exist as being.

                Like Allan Poe’s Annabel Lee who’s fenced apart from the masculine world, I too learned to behold life in the absence of men, yet every tunnel has its end, the end where light started to flicker as hope, itw’s the day I first realized I have him, a single man with versatile existence who taught me the real image of love. Every bit of him spread my happiness to be larger than life. His deep pure voice gave me strength in every struggle through his words of encouragement. The modest soul between his eyes I longed each mornin’ seem so addicting. His jokes taught me how to forget fear. When I lost hope, he stirred me to go through, healing my wounded knees in every downfall. He’ll always be my knight in flabbergasting armor that made me feel more like a princess. As times passed and days went off, I knew that this love would last a lifetime. No matter what happens he’s just a step behind to watch me. I couldn’t find another man more thoughtful and loving as he. Because of him, I learned to understand the meaning of life. He enlightened my mind to discover my mistakes and shortcomings, so as my knacks and charms within. I knew in my heart that I shouldn’t fear sorrow and pain for there’s he to help me win the race. As I write this article, I keep a promise to myself to treasure this gift of God…my priceless beloved, the king of my heart, my dear father whom I loved most.

 

“the world could die and everything may lie,

Still you shant cry coz time may pass

But longer that it’ll last, I’ll be by your side

Forever by your side..”

                                

                                                      -214/ Rrivermaya-

               

 

 

Author's Note

.we are all capable of loving and deserve to be loved...
=]

Reviews

[Renée]

Oh MusicFunk what a beautiful heart song.. when I read the ending who it was to..I cried... written from your heart for your father... so much a father teaches his daughters.. oh every man should read this ... actually everyone should it is stunning !

[shunik]

thanks a lot my friend =]

[Renée]

my pleasure !

[shunik]

:)

[Parashar]

nice vocabulary , well written

[kjsa]

It's great and well written.

[shunik]

enjoy reading!!!

[McNamara]

This is very honest, the combination of your charming vocabulary and the personal subject matter make for something hard to read as an outsider but it is undeniably beautiful. I love the way you write. '...my knight in flabbergasting armour...' will stay with me for a while.

[dan nacario]

an amazing poem!!

[Amata Luna]

I can really feel the love in here. The truth is that the title pretty caught up my attention and I don't regret reading such a piece. This is beautifully woven and interestingly catches readers with its title alone. Great job. :)

[RainQueen]

"Knight in flabbergasting armor." I don't know what that means, but for some reason, it really resonates. Your depiction of a girl's love for her Dad is beautiful and unique. Thanks so much for posting this lovely write~

[EMF]

A marvelously beautiful write. Poem or prose? WHo cares when it is this well written. Superb

[Coyote Poetry]

Thank you for the amazing poem. A good parent love is forever and permanent. I have four children and I worry for them daily. I like the description and story in the poem. You are wise to appreciate a good father. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote