Nightwish

life is unconditional

 

Nightwish

 

To little twilights twirlin’ that’s full of mirth,

To Mr. Moon please do have pity

Ye’ all heavenly prosecutors lend me an ear,

For my lost hope hath come to an end.

 

My heart’s solely livin’

Drowned to be afraid of breakin’

The fragile self was captivated,

To spent the night with my last prayer.

 

Into my mind I was reminded

 I need a friend, a companion, a fellow

Unconsciously need not my intuition

To choose the most I desire to live with.

 

A tear had fallen seem unbended

‘hope these words to be unbroken

Unfold my heart with a precious wish,

Lingered the longing to have a brother.

Reviews

[Charile]

Hmm I reallly like this. Great job

[Amata Luna]

The last two lines seem to bring me home... I also long to have a brother but for me that would be a dream... This poem of yours reflected much of that longing and I hope to "unfold my heart with [such] a precious wish".

[RainQueen]

An original and poignant poem. You have a way of putting words together that don't make immediate sense, but then come together to make a whole new meaning somehow..."a tear had fallen seem unbended..." An arresting write. thank you for posing it.

[EMF]

Marvelously written and with such plantive longing. Wonderful write again.

[Coyote Poetry]

A nice poem to the night and to the moon. A wish for a brother is a good wish. Good to have people to share a life with. A excellent poem.
Coyote