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In a world of anonymous
I am no existence

To people known as humans
I passed on the street
I am no visible

Born on the 14th
Cursed with a sin
I am on light!

Lookin' then leavin'
Saturated
I am intoxicated.

Author's Note

little thoughts!!

Reviews

[lady france]

i somewhat can relate since my parents hide me to the world even if they themselves can't took care of me in my 18 years of existence..

[EMF]

If these are your little thoughts... then my head is cooked. Stunning and beautifully alive. Burning with isolation and simply devine

[Grace Catherine C.]

hmmmm, quirky.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

The end gives an uplifting sense of freedom in this piece.. I like the idea of being invisible...It's supernatural...Great write!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Very nice, the feeling of being invisible shows in this. I know that feeling, many seem to sometimes in there life.

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to feel like you are invisible. It is a two-sided coin to be seen. Must be doing something bad or good. I like how you ended the poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Seanne Tholltree]

invisible existence.............