"Krizie Love"

A Poem by CHRIS ANDES

..to my little one =]

I once have my li'l pet kitty that I often called Krizie,
with my tender hugs and kisses, for me she was a baby,
no wonder I was addicted over her sweetness that lingered,
her paws caressed my soul encircling her furry tail around.

Yet her young world wasn't a forever,
teardrops have fallen for a long time without her with me,
the warmth of her love suddenly shivered numbly,
her heart was stolen away as my blue skies turned to gray.

she was gone alone, leaving home and me,
now my hopes were dyin', believing she'll come back no more,
my heart was broken as I cursed the day she left,
but still I keep holdin' on her memories that living.

her untimely affection brought new life within her,
her youthful mind could not fully understand,
how this worldly love she knew made her feel so blue,
a moral was reckoned over her twisted ways.

And now I was satisfied with my new Krizie,
now that she became more gentle and sound,
with her two little p***y by her side,
fervour of a new love aroused her to be better.

© 2012 CHRIS ANDES

My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register

Reviews

Heromen Selena

awww! I have too lost a dear cat that was just as close as you described. Beautiful.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

yeah it really hurts
thanks
=]

Layla J Omorose

Pets quickly become more like our children or best friend. Since I have my own animal and have lost animals as well I understand. Good work

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

you're right
thank you
=]

Tomislav Petricevic

That's so sweet! And a bit sad. But cats absolutely rule!
Good job. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

t.y
=]

Fréyjä Helv..

I love cats too... I mean I'm crazy about cats. The affection they give us are heartwarming. Nice poem... :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

thanks a lot vittoria
=]

Marie

Oh that's very sweet. I love this poem, because I have 3 cats of my own. Little Krizie sounds so cute and loveable.

Posted 12 Years Ago

12 Years Ago

yes it is
=]

Maan

Excellent poem, I love the idea, I loved the flow, I loved the feelings reflecting by your words. Though I never have a kittie to be with, but I can still feel you through your poem which is beautifully expressed. :) It sounded sweet and simple, very polite and loving, captivating from the very starting line. Great work, keep writing and keep sharing. :)