CANDLE LIGHT

fear is where I sleep,

darkness as it is,

is my unseen world

left me to be a living dead,

being lost, I found  a dream

then spark a little love just like a candle light

brighter it shines than the sun

it showed the path,

guided my way,

revealed the truth of far away

beyond my thoughts

deep down my soul

I found the magic and spell of home.

fear of end is undeniable

this melting candle  gleamed of death

but still hope resides in the blossoming of fire 

that out of breath awakes a little tomorrow.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

today I have confessed and my thoughts started to float like a weighless feather searching for nothingness. I just wanna share this wonderful feeling of being blessed;)

Reviews

[kublakhan27]

Candles are fascinating things...they are a source of solace and comfort, yet they also remind of of our own mortality and of how all good things must come to an end...still I read this as an uplifting piece, with some beautiful imagery scattered throughout, especially in the last line, which ended it on a perfect and positive note...I've always loved candles, so this piece truly spoke to me...you've said many things that I wish I said myself...nicely done :)

[shunik]

wow,thanks.. this speaks of my dreams :)

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome :)

[realmwriter]

Sit back and count the blessing one by one. Tick them off each on your thumb. There in the middle of all that fun, you find yourself, run, run, run. Frolick as little girls in fields of flowers do, fall asleep on grass as tall as you, wake and find the day anew. Run back home to grab a bight and right back out before the night. This is a wonderful piece seonne

[shunik]

thank you if it pleased you ;)

[realmwriter]

It did indeed, though I'm not sure why it inspired me to write the little piece above. You're welcome

[Jon Roggie]

Great write. Great message. I hope this carries on for you.

[SOUL LESS]

Read "Bliss" by Katherine Mansfield. Do you good. And The Doll's House by the same author while you're at it. You seem to have terrible handwriting and dashed untidy room.

[shunik]

merci !! :)

[SOUL LESS]

Well, did you read them? :)

[shunik]

yeah, i did and it was great, thanks again :)