In My Head

In my head
there came a knock
a huge black cloud
known as PAIN
cracking and thunderin'
to get in...

gettin' over my heart and soul
suffocating that yellow sunshine
with such dark memory
known as PAST...

until suddenly it melts,
started to drop and drop...
...and drop...
slowly fallen like rain.

I don't know why
but that knockin' stopped ...
..turned into beats of the drum.

Rain is a violin singing ..
..makin' me FLOAT
....STARE
....LISTEN
...and SMILE..



and there was you...
........
..............I mean LIFE.

-musicfunk-  

         

Author's Note

..probably a product of happy memories,
just being glad discovering things
...start appreciating life and you'll see =]

Reviews

[PaperLife]

You have a very delicate way with words that's very in depth and amazing. They're like soft petals from springtime playing across a sketchbook patterned with all of life's up and downs. Your words are deep, passionate. And amazing. This is beautiful and your talent shines through brightly. It takes me around and back to the past and into the future. You have a way with your words that makes sense. That is solid and beautiful. I love it

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks a lot =]

[TheSweet]

Sometimes you just have to step back and see how amazing life is. Thanks for sharing :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

true =]
thanks!

[Krista Weiss]

Great job!! :) Loved it!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you krista
now i see your face =]

[Krista Weiss]

haha yup :) finally decided to actually put a picture up!

[Akujuobi Godsgrant]

That's great. You created nice imageries. Keep it up dear.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for the review
=]

[Akujuobi Godsgrant]

That's great. You created nice imageries. Keep it up dear.

[Be myself!]

Awesome. Brava!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you =]

[Be myself!]

Your welcome