My Queen

12-14-12

you're my soul
my humor and light
who paints a smile
whenever I frowned,
who kicks my butt
whenever I'm down,
who gives such love
that I so desire.

your soft touch
retells a sweet dream,
your eyes glimpse
a thousand memories
though I'm cold at times,
you showed life's real color,
you're a true sonata,
I forever sing untired.

let these words
remind you
of the promise
we keep in all eternity
a chain of friendship
and love
with you my angel so bright.

I still remember
when I got home from school
you always wait for me
to come in through the gate door,
or the times you wanna play
just like sayin' you're the one to stay
in every hour of solitude
when pain is my food.

when morning shines on the 14th
thought there were no wearies
as what I said on my prayers
but it wasn't that way
coz you leave me halfway
life's but a tragedy
as you died on my
BIRTHDAY.

hope, I still behold
coz my tears seem to
 FALL
knowin' that I'm all
ALONE
now and forever
I will see you no more.

-musicfunk-           

Author's Note

this is for my one and only Queen
december 14, I woke up with her jumping and waving her tail as if greeting me..but when I got home from school
she's already dead due to high blood pressure
and it so break my heart that I came up with this poem as a tribute to her precious existence =]

Reviews

[Shannon Leigh]

I wrote a poem when my dog died as well, he was my best friend from when I was five until I was 16, so I can understand how you must have felt. This was touching and beautiful. I felt the emotions swell as the poem went on. Great work. I absolutely loved this{:

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you =]

[Kato Uchiha]

cute dog
great poem
sad loss
i's beautiful !

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for the review
=]

[Jordan's Back]

This is bittersweet Im sorry for your loss

[CHRIS ANDES]

i've move on thanks for the review
=]

[Calibaster]

wow. That's good, and bad ... if you know what I mean. Good as in great poem, bad as in... well, more like sad. Good job though, keep up the great work!(oh and by the way, in the first line, you used the wrong your, it should have been YOU'RE. Simple mistake.) Good Job!:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank's for that =]

[Calibaster]

Your welcome.

[Broken Soul]

You're* ^

[Baby Ricochet]

Sweet tribute. No one loves you like your dog.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks friend and i guess she deserved it =]

[David Scott]

It seems that our pets help teach us the lessons of life. The good and the painful ones as well. They seem to always be just we we need, even when they are no more...

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah you're right
thanks =]

[RachelReaper]

I'm so sorry that happened, your puppy looks so sweet. It was really nice of you to write a tribute in her memory.

[CHRIS ANDES]

yes she's indeed very sweet
thanks =]

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad poem. I love my animals too. I have cats. I have one left. She watch me write and is my biggest fan. I like the photo and the description. Good to keep the photos and thoughts in a important book. Always can bring back memories this way. I'm sorry for your lost.
Coyote

[CHRIS ANDES]

and memories last a lifetime
thank you =]

[Tex]

wonderful wonderful poem. i am so sorry for your loss.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for the review =]

[Annabelle Lee]

Sweet.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks annabelle =]