My Queen

12-14-12

you're my soul
my humor and light
who paints a smile
whenever I frowned,
who kicks my butt
whenever I'm down,
who gives such love
that I so desire.

your soft touch
retells a sweet dream,
your eyes glimpse
a thousand memories
though I'm cold at times,
you showed life's real color,
you're a true sonata,
I forever sing untired.

let these words
remind you
of the promise
we keep in all eternity
a chain of friendship
and love
with you my angel so bright.

I still remember
when I got home from school
you always wait for me
to come in through the gate door,
or the times you wanna play
just like sayin' you're the one to stay
in every hour of solitude
when pain is my food.

when morning shines on the 14th
thought there were no wearies
as what I said on my prayers
but it wasn't that way
coz you leave me halfway
life's but a tragedy
as you died on my
BIRTHDAY.

hope, I still behold
coz my tears seem to
 FALL
knowin' that I'm all
ALONE
now and forever
I will see you no more.

-musicfunk-           

Author's Note

this is for my one and only Queen
december 14, I woke up with her jumping and waving her tail as if greeting me..but when I got home from school
she's already dead due to high blood pressure
and it so break my heart that I came up with this poem as a tribute to her precious existence =]

Reviews

[Shannon Leigh]

I wrote a poem when my dog died as well, he was my best friend from when I was five until I was 16, so I can understand how you must have felt. This was touching and beautiful. I felt the emotions swell as the poem went on. Great work. I absolutely loved this{:

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you =]

[teardrop]

oh wow so sorry about your dog. that is sad,
Love your write.

[CHRIS ANDES]

well, thanks
=]

[krish]

IT'S COOL.........
NICE WORK...........
hey....the doggie at the end is ur's doggie.....

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah, thanks
=]

[The Pain Stays Fresh]

That's so sad!!! I'm legitly tearing up right now. It reminds me of my SammieDog. We had to have her put down about a year ago. So glad you shared this. :')

[CHRIS ANDES]

oh,thanks =]

[Jon Roggie]

Halfway through, I realized where this was leading. I would love to bring home another companion, but it would not be right to leave them alone for at least twelve hours a day. Yes, I have been through this. This brought back quite a few memories. Well done.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you

[Undying Glory]

I'm really sorry about your pet :(
This was a pretty darn good tribute to her though. And it's so amazing, the impact that pets can have on our lives. I love the raw frelings in this one, this was very heartfelt work here. Good job!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks =]

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlande..]

:(((((((((((((
ahhhhh
I can't write a review properly..I need a cigarette and I will read 2 more times and try again

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

:'( at the picture up topppppp

[Shmoke-Sifted Heftlander]

I can't read it any more times :( not right now..it's a beautiful pome..*hug..I can't do much except listen to music with my cat for a long time

[MOON]

Oh so sad, lovely tribute to a much loved Queen! Take care.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you =]

[Renée]

Oh ! Your poem is a sweet tribute to a beloved Pet...My heart goes out to you..thank you for sharing you sweet Queen with us

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks as well for the review =]

[Krista Weiss]

Aww!! So sorry! :( Really nice poem thought!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

=]

[Bluefire]

She was so beautiful. I love that you wrote for your beloved pet.
This poem almost made me burst into tears, but if I did that, I wouldn't be able to read anymore, so I held them in ^^
Well done!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks bluefire =]

[Bluefire]

No problem ^^