ERN

"from Ped: the untold words."

bring me light
with your eyes so bright
sing me life
with that guitar in white
lingered a sound
of your pure heartbeats.

hear me now
 your song's so driven
it makes me weak
like your smiles
could melt.

sweet song from your lips
played back my dreams
it's unpredicted
now you rock
show me the path
before beating..
..stops.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

it took me few weeks to put into words what really fascinates me about her. Ern is a cool protagonist from the Thai movie 'Suckseed'.
'better watch it and see for yourself
=]

Reviews

[∠( ᐛ 」..]

I lost my breath ... completely. I heard about the movie before but I dont know why I didnt buy it e.e back to netflix I guess lol
I really enjoyed the flow and the sweet words this poem shows :) I never read this beautiful piece, I am amazed :) " sweet song from your lips, played back my dreams" I honestly loved this part (and the end of the poem too :3)
please keep writing ^_^
thanks for sharing.
100/100

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks a lot!
=]

[Broken Wings]

I really enjoyed the way it flowed. It was a nice poem :D

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you
=]

[Seanne Tholltree]

cool...

[Broken Wings]

Welcome :)