ERN

"from Ped: the untold words."

bring me light
with your eyes so bright
sing me life
with that guitar in white
lingered a sound
of your pure heartbeats.

hear me now
 your song's so driven
it makes me weak
like your smiles
could melt.

sweet song from your lips
played back my dreams
it's unpredicted
now you rock
show me the path
before beating..
..stops.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

it took me few weeks to put into words what really fascinates me about her. Ern is a cool protagonist from the Thai movie 'Suckseed'.
'better watch it and see for yourself
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Reviews

[Sasha]

Very sweet poem.

[Coyote Poetry]

I have always like the rock and roll singing females. They had a nice edge to them. Nice photos and strong poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[ForeverNever]

Flows nice and easy:]
Nice write:]

[Tunder]

Being very musically un-inclined, it amazes me when people can interpret music like you can. This is amazing, beautiful work! 100/100

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks
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[Barbara Walker]

Music touches our very essence and sometimes you find a musical piece or musician that just rocks your soul, every beat resonates within you and this write shows that!

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah that's true
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[Annabelle Lee]

i definitely will. nice write

[Max_E_Stone]

I love how rhythmic this is. And your words are so poetic. They flow so easily together. As I read, I could literally hear music. Great poem!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks for the appreciation Max
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[Krista Weiss]

Aww cute!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah really
hehe
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[Seanne Tholltree]

nice craft seonne talk-anne...ern should/must read this piece for her to show that it's your tribute to her...thumbs up...:)

[CHRIS ANDES]

lolz...
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[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks anyway
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[Calibaster]

that's awsome! I love it, it is a great description of music!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks Alverrann
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[Calibaster]

you are very welcome.