GREEN LEMON

...transcendentalism...

tiny stem towards the sky
with great spunky spiny thorns
has built the courage of
scented leaves
his upward dream
of rapid growth
seems so honorable
that even storms and thunders
hardened his soul
gleam the spines when
sunlight strike
behold the armor of
this warrior plant.

-musicfunk- 

Author's Note

..daydreaming in the morning
=]

Reviews

[Anubis]

Such a strange subject, it's great!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks=]

[Robbie~xoxo~]

This is unique... Lovely daydreams.. Nicely done!

[...]

I absolutely loved it! So creative to put such emotion into the fruit :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

t.y lynn =]

[judith106]

I really like this...love how you gave the " Green Lemon " such human emotion and a personality determined to thrive and fight for life...nice

[CHRIS ANDES]

I just adapted my learning in a seminar in contemporary writing
=]

[ForeverNever]

"The warrior plant" , I liked that. Catchy. Not my usual perfernce of reading, but well done.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks =]

[kc]

why not try yellow lemon,,it's juicier

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the photo and the words. I love to watch nature. Some places a million wild flowers will grow. Allow us to see the miracle of nature. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Grace Catherine C.]

This was really great, and kinda fun.

[Jordan A. Wilson]

does wonders for the imagination

[Empirik]

Wonderful exercise, and articulation! Brava :)