LET GO

..let me hear you whisper..

My thoughts are turnin'
Feels like it's burnin'
Livin' the power of desire
that makes me so high
did you ever know
how your words inspired me so?
Let it go, let it flow
I wanna rock but
I'm not a funk
Creatin' this soul
enthusiast my young spirit
you're true oh
you're so true.. .
lightin' me up to
a handful war of beatin'
slippirin' words
out of my head
you're a song that seems
a dream to be so real
ain't movin' on
to wake up
just countin' on every music
from your voice to fill me twice
li'l consciousness then I found
so decide to have a sudden.. .

STOP.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..dedicated to avril lavigne's album "let go"
..this poem just popped up as I found some writing stuff of her in the old magazines..
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Reviews

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Awesome! really really good stuff here, dear poet

[shunik]

thanks lynn
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[Fréyjä Helv..]

I love avril!.. And this is good stuff as well... :)

[shunik]

t.y Vit
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[Andrew N. Farrens]

An obsession is always healthy.......

[Rhea752]

Lovely. Well written. Great flow. Good vocabulary. I could keep going but that would get boring :P

[MOON]

Lovely flow and sentiments

[Baby Ricochet]

Good job man

[shunik]

thanks babe
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[Coyote Poetry]

Nice flow of thoughts in the poem. I like the strong statements. Allowing the reader to fall into the thinking of the words. A very good way to end the excellent poem.
Coyote

[shunik]

thank you sir
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[dan nacario]

cool poem..it is really amazing...

[shunik]

salamat dan
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[Irvette Dauphine]

haha.. like this poem... :)

[shunik]

thank you Irvette
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[Krista Weiss]

Really good poem!!

[shunik]

thanks kris
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