Glimpse

..my last stare..

heavy swifts of wind
flashes through my face
from oft the window
of the jeep
travelling to the blank faces
 of the earth.

uncared to life
so ordinary
like my dealings
patterned each day,
wishing for someone,
to meet me halfway.

Until that wish
lift up to heaven
thought of words sing
in crimson joy
uttered as music
from angel's lyre.

As speeding wheels
then twist to turn,
a blurry figure
caught my vision
walking down
the endless road.

Our loneliness
both subside
as our sight
swiftly coincide
'tis a language
can't be denied.

Yet this joy
seems like a glimpse
even a tear leaves
no time to shape
as we depart and
take each others fate.

The cruel road
continues to flow
with darkened sky
black as a crow
cast on your figure
that's now a shadow.

Familiar cold air
dried up my soul
I know I'm a traveller
and a fool
who holds this memory
only now as a dream.

-musicfunk-

Author's Note

..from a long journey towards home
=]
enjoy reading

Reviews

[Krista Weiss]

Really good poem! I love it!!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks krista
=]

[blueseeker]

great write my friend.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you ;p

[Chip]

This is a really good poem. You write like a true poet. Well done!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you
=]

[Draven]

My dear good Sir, this is what I call true poetry.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank you ;p

[Barbara Walker]

So many people on earth feeling and being alone. We long to meet the people who are in tune with us, wishing for someone to meet us halfway. Love that line!

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks barb's
=]

[natzky]

wow...nice one music funk this is really awesome, i really love open roads ...lol's

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks natzky

[MOON]

The s truly lovely lyrical write.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks moon

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Beautiful imagery.

[CHRIS ANDES]

thanks ;p

[Brandon S. Whitten]

A glimpse into the soul. Excellent read and write. Namaste

[CHRIS ANDES]

thank's ;p