Lyrico

I wanna rock out
slammin' chords with endless rhymes
wrecking in my veins.

Reviews

[Seanne Tholltree]

rocking out boost someones ego to go further...gotcha..

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha
nice Seanne
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[Grace Catherine C.]

I love haikus, and I love this. Simplicity is powerfull. Rock n' roll my friend.

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha
thanks
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[Knight in Armor]

The mix of musical terms with the shortness of the piece causes it to become almost a chorus in the song of your writing. Excellent job, musicfunk!

[CHRIS ANDES]

=]
thank you!

[Serenity Faith]

Simply awesome! Loved the rockn' terms!

[MOON]

Lovely and short to the point.

[Rhea752]

GREAT JOB!!! i absolutely love this poem. but i think it's a senryu not a haiku. a senryu is like a haiku but on human nature. a haiku really only about nature. i really like this poem keep it up!! :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

really? thanks for the knowledge
I wasn't aware of that
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[Rhea752]

i wasn't aware of it till 2 days ago soo :P

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha..I'll check on my other haiku coz maybe some of them were also senryu
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[Rhea752]

the two types are the same in formatting so i doubt anyone cares if you call them haikus :)

[CHRIS ANDES]

yeah
ok
thanks
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[Scytheriax]

Very short and to the point.
I also love the image that you picked to go along with this piece.
The diction is really good, too.

[Barbara Walker]

Love your word choices to show your intent! rock out, slammin' chords, wrecking veins! Herd rock!

[Coyote Poetry]

Good desire in the poem. Good to want music and rock to create a better place. I like the artwork and the amazing words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Fréyjä Helv..]

That's pretty hardcore... Wish the picture would be an electric guitar or something... But this is fine too... rock on!

[CHRIS ANDES]

haha
I was trying to find a guitar but I can't find any that suits the emotion
but I'll try
thanks
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