tragic drop

tragic drop

A Chapter by CHRIS ANDES
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..cold summer...

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my heart is melting
as rain does in every fall
drowned in tragedy.




© 2012 CHRIS ANDES


Author's Note

CHRIS ANDES
..I wanna hear your thoughts
=]

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Poignant write very good

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Pax
sadness speaks throughout such short poem. nice

Posted 12 Years Ago


I can see the metaphor you were thinking of, but I don't correlate rain melting with drowned. That was my first immediate thought. However, reading it, again, I do like the line drowned in tragedy!...snow melts...

Posted 12 Years Ago


CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

haha
thanks
=]
You said a lot in so few words. Using rain to make tragedy have purpose was very good . Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 12 Years Ago


CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

thank you sir
=]
Heartbeat frequencies,
patterned sidewalk water marks,
and thoughts of thawing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


GunMetal

12 Years Ago

Those are my thoughts. =)
Nice work.
CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

..yes, it coincide with heartaches actually
thanks
=]
nice shortly craft..

Posted 12 Years Ago


I think it's nice... Though I've heard the phrase so many times that I've quite felt numb to the thought of it. Maybe others would feel its intensity. But not me. Sorry.. But nice work..

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is lovely! Very thoughtful and emotional. I love that picture, too! I'm personally not a big fan of haiku's but this is just lovely! Great job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


a powerful sadness in only a few words.

Posted 12 Years Ago


CHRIS ANDES

12 Years Ago

;p
t.y
An senyru (I think)...very good...

Posted 12 Years Ago



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