Stay
A Chapter by
CHRIS ANDES
walk away
Stay As people passed by, footsteps lift to far away from less cared strangers from this diff'rent place I've seen a piece of heaven where I choose to stay. As solitude smiles, I sit in this friendless day empty words to say. Common walks went by, 'til you came and perch with me a fond drifter's stare. With such tender smiles vouch a friendly company braced me to get by gazeless stare then dwell mirthful song to us befall like a timeless
chime. Bliss of sunset came fallin' to this paradise our stay's near goodbye. As our ways depart this li'l sweet memory lasts a promise to stay.
© 2012 CHRIS ANDES
Author's Note
..this is an art of reminiscing the past
inspired by the song 'awake'-second hand serenade
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Reviews
Very melancholy but has an almost longing feel, and is very true. Good job and your poetry is very nice. You should definitely keep writing from your heart. :) Very very unique!!! :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
so sad..and yet so true..
Posted 12 Years Ago
so sad..and yet so true..
this is a heartbreaking beautiful write. great job once more. keep writing!!!!!!!
Posted 12 Years Ago
this is a heartbreaking beautiful write. great job once more. keep writing!!!!!!!
Very pretty..a reminder of how we impact those we meet..uplifting in the end
Posted 12 Years Ago
Very pretty..a reminder of how we impact those we meet..uplifting in the end
12 Years Ago
really?
hm,thanks
=]
12 Years Ago
Yes really ( :
Oh this is a beautiful poem! I can connect deeply to this too. Thank you for allowing your inspiration to touch me. :) Great write!
~Lizzy~
Posted 12 Years Ago
Oh this is a beautiful poem! I can connect deeply to this too. Thank you for allowing your inspiration to touch me. :) Great write!
~Lizzy~
12 Years Ago
thanks Liz
=]
12 Years Ago
You're welcome!
Nicely done! One note, though: I think it should just be people pass, not people passes. I've never heard Awake, but I love Your Call buy Secondhand Serenade!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nicely done! One note, though: I think it should just be people pass, not people passes. I've never heard Awake, but I love Your Call buy Secondhand Serenade!
12 Years Ago
oh yeah thanks for pointing it out
..I guess 'your call' is the most popular
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th.. read more oh yeah thanks for pointing it out
..I guess 'your call' is the most popular
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thanks!
i wish it was me or it was me already?
lol
Posted 12 Years Ago
i wish it was me or it was me already?
lol
12 Years Ago
it wasn't but it may partly talks about you if you had an experience of someone leaving you
=.. read more it wasn't but it may partly talks about you if you had an experience of someone leaving you
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This is one of my favourites of yours, the language you use is really what i like most.
'Timeless chime', 'fond', It's very crafted and delicate and hugely effective. Another example would be sitting 'In' a friendless day, it's very charming.
Posted 12 Years Ago
This is one of my favourites of yours, the language you use is really what i like most.
'Timeless chime', 'fond', It's very crafted and delicate and hugely effective. Another example would be sitting 'In' a friendless day, it's very charming.
12 Years Ago
thank you McNamara for appreciating it
=]
wow...such a nice write..heheh..
....may pinanghuhugutan..LOL
Posted 12 Years Ago
wow...such a nice write..heheh..
....may pinanghuhugutan..LOL
12 Years Ago
thanks natzky but i was only inspired by the song
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12 Years Ago
heheh...ukie dukie..shall we it's already 9:35???
Lovely write
I Like the lines
As solitude smiles,
I sit in this friendless day
empty words to say.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Lovely write
I Like the lines
As solitude smiles,
I sit in this friendless day
empty words to say.
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Added on July 6, 2012
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