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A Poem by Choosing Life

 

Speechless…
My words lay under my tongue
Trapped by boundaries, real and imagined.
My emotions on simmer, boil over,
Knowing only one thought,
only one wish…
Your name draws me in,
Like your arms once did…
The voice that seems to know the core of my being,
Touching places I never knew existed.
I have been loved and been to love,
But this is different~
Like wishes that live in your smile,
That breaks down barriers,
I have neither brick wall nor spider web,
Where you are concerned,
I rest under your soul,
Like covers to my being,
I love getting lost in you,
Amazed and impressed.
And my motive is only to love you more~
 
Breathless…
I breathe you in, like… harmony.
Knows unity with sound,
Who knew words exchanged could bring such hope.
I had stopped believing in men like you,
And now my fear rests in having to let you go.
See, many over look priceless treasures,
But I know magic in your eyes..
I once said who needs smoke and mirrors,
But your magic isn’t dark,
No illusions played on the mind, fooling the eyes of my heart.
You’re more like a miracle than magic~
 
And I am so breathless,
So I breathe less until your heart joins mine…
You tap into a place in me where I yearn to know you more…
Wondering can I get enough of this man I grow to admire.
Wondering can I find me in your touch,
Can I trace your thoughts with my soul and know you,
Beyond fabulous thought
And peaceful speech,
Beyond incredible touches,
that wash me in your essence
and leave me bathed in something so profound..
Immersed in new found clarity,
Can I digest the man, that I crave..
Can I eat of the beauty I come to see,
 in a place I never expected to find it…
 
Like rain you refresh me,
Bringing new life and love,
While I quiet myself to watch you perform…
Watching you open like the only book I ever want to read,
My eyes search the lines of you,
And something beautiful happens…
I walk away satisfied and free.
Encouraged and empowered~
 
 
So pardon me as I long to hold onto this YOU, I find.
Pardon me as I long to read your thoughts before they surface,
And know your needs before you find them,
And how I crave that God let them be met in me.
So that when you do discover your needs they will already be fulfilled.
And pardon me as I love to kiss old wounds made by careless words,
And ease old hurts caused by rough hearts,
That took your strength for granted,
and crushed the places in you that needed to be nurtured…
and should my lips be permitted to kiss away pain,
may they brush against your mind until ---
You had no doubts about YOU…
 See my aim is simply to love you more~
 

© 2008 Choosing Life


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Wow. This piece here does something special for me. It feels as if you are writing from a place that I don't know I've ever REALLY gotten to hear before. You've been open; but this is absolutely BEAUTIFUL.

Dope piece...

Posted 16 Years Ago


"See my aim is simply to love you more~"

I love this line. It feels so much like something taken out of the lyric of a love song, though I didn't much enjoy the fact that you had to insert it at the bottom end of a rather lengthy poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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