Running Through All The Stop Signs

 

The perfect indiscretion

A sex session

Shared

 Between two strangers

Ignoring the danger

And the lack of knowing

Flowing on a vibe

That could have made them

 Friends for life

 Maybe led to husband and wife

Instead it will most likely be for tonight

Only ~

No growing,

A partaking of grown-ness

Even though it was childish

Like high school kids  

Kissing and petting

Till no doesn’t make any sense

To die here

Excited

For a moment

 Passing by each other

Like the earth spinning

 And the sun

Not touching but consuming

Each other all at once

A smile and a giggle

Something beyond physical

 And attraction becomes

A distraction

As our bodies make us aromatic~

 Interaction takes place

You feeling me out

And I am digging on you

And everything is cool and easy

You pleading don’t leave me

Just stay a little while longer

Damn I wanted to be stronger

But I hesitated

As I grab my things

Thinking it is too late

But my resistance is still strong

But your persistence is stronger

I fight no longer

As hours have changed numbers

3 times

I open thighs

As your fingers play in my waters

Tasting my rain on the tips

It drips

 I beg

Let’s quit

And you promise

To stop

Tick tock

The morning hours spinning

Like the earth on axis

I wonder why you ask this

Telling you I am not ready

But wishing I was

 Knowing I am not

Yet your touch is opening me up

A million thoughts in my head

Get out of his bed

And run

But I do none of them

As your lips

Make my lips

Feel appreciated

Savory kisses

 Make heat

Undeniable

Dopamine’s arrival and pheromones

Mix into this smell

That causes animalistic passions

 To surface

And like animals we behave

Slaves to the sin

 Of burning skin

Wanting to be cooled~

 I wake up next to a man

I don’t know

Wanting to go

But wanting to stay

Attachments made in the wrong way

Stay strong on the heart and mind

And our connection may have been lost

 Or even tossed into the winds

Because we had nothing to keep it anchored in

No foundation to begin with

Just touches and whispers

Laughter that simmered like potpourri on the stove

The scents now gone

With the rising of the sun

Now showing

Both of us unsure

Not regretting the pleasure

But mourning the demise of something

 That could have been great

But both of us are back to alone

I’ll call you later

Rings like sirens

But is it strong enough

To make either of us

Pick up the phone again

The end of our first date

Concludes us with

A hug at the door

And we hold on

Like we both know

I'll never see you again~

Reviews

[R J Askew]

Sustained passion. A very strong piece. It feels as if you are observing yourself and your feelings acutely. The moment and the mood is intense. There is drama in the way you waver and the hours tick by. The reader thinks simultaneously go! stay! go! stay! And there is a great contrast between the moment of the night of passion and the prospects of something stretching much further. But the best part is the poignancy of the parting, which is difficult. The poem is intimate in that it shows us the erotic and the emotional in detail. Powerful stuff.

[Amanda]

omg....the feelings that pass through me when i read this piece....the remembrance of times long gone. it saddens me that this happens more often than not, especially nowadays. to be that detached, is never good and though it may feel good for that time, what about the rest?

this is sad, but sometimes very true.

good writing.

Always,
Amanda @};--