Involuntarily

Involuntarily

A Poem by Choosing Life

 

Involuntarily,
He became a desire she craved...
A spirit that could touch her dreams,
And make her believe again.
Standing in the mirror she caught a glimpse
Of herself through his eyes
And saw some one she wanted to be
She wished she could see as he did.
Thoughts of him massage her soul
And she smells jasmine hope being renewed
His mind the ripest cantaloupe
And she bites into juicy mental mastery
So glad to see beyond his skin.
His love is like a Kingdom being unveiled
And he becomes Majestic,
Yet he serves her grapes of knowledge
While she lays back.
Watching him with her eyes closed
While hands touch skin that shouldn't be exposed
She drops her clothes~
And he delights in her nakedness
Her heart is now undressed
And they touch beyond the here and now
Metaphysical explorations are delved into
And kisses wash them...
 

© 2008 Choosing Life


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"Alive, sensual Choosing Life strums the heart strings again. This tireless reader never feels anything but delight in the way she tirelessly writes." So very real. I was deeply moved by the vision you share when you write: Yet he serves her grapes of knowledge/While she lays back. /Watching him with her eyes closed/ While hands touch skin that shouldn't be exposed/ She drops her clothes~ /And he delights in her nakedness/Her heart is now undressed/And they touch beyond the here and now... mmm, mmm, goood!

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is your most intising poem yet, you have me lost in your thought, those short direct lines (your trade mark and foot print) steered my emotion and spirit through the most beautiful journey of you heart and soul.

I love this.

Thank you for sharing.

Love from.
Me

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

hmmmm...

Posted 16 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Metaphysical explorations are delved into,
and kisses wash them...

WOW!!!! If poetry is somehow equal to 'game', Tish you are truly an all-pro. You could make a grown man melt.



Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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