That Night

 

 

The night my soul died

The wind beat upon my house

And entered in through unseen cracks

I felt it raise the hairs on my neck

And I shivered within me

Feeling a cold I had never known

Then your voice said goodbye

And I knew why

My soul did die

Reviews

[Steve Thompson]

The wind beat upon my houseAnd entered in through unseen ...love that line, the death of the soul, happening that night, very to the point, and I like that.

[forfila]

Seems sad Choosing Life.

It is very well written, I love the lines "I felt it raise the hairs on my neck
And I shivered within me"

beautifully put.

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