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A Poem by Choosing Life

 

Unaware we stood in lines
To be the next subject of his verse
 Our thoughts he rehearsed
Until his words could coerce
Us to undress in his words
And we got lost in his verbs
Because love was what we heard
 
And somewhere deep within we needed to
Believe it true
That we became his Muse
Something he could write to
And in life do
As we ignite tunes
From his pen that he could take flight through
 
Yet we were just the next in line
Taking turns while losing time
Caught up in a web of rhymes
While lyrically he committed heart crimes
He should do hard time
For messing with our minds
 
But still he speaks
A tongue full of ink
Steadily leaks
A maze of deceit
While one retreats,
The next believes…

© 2008 Choosing Life


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Wow, this was truly a nice a well rounded read.
Unaware we stood in linesTo be the next subject of his verse, great line...I read this and a lot of things were flying through my mind about the subject matter,
I imagined someone being love scolded in relaationships, but I thought how this could relate to God also, but that is me also..Clap...Clap really good.

Posted 16 Years Ago


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